I guess I will have to keep reading to figure out what happened next unique style!

keep writing, you will improve if you try. the rhyming does bring the poem down because it sounds forced, poems dont have to rhyme.
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

Nice poem..5/5! Please check out my poem " My Dad: Dead And Gone Forever" it would mean a lot to me.. thans.. higs

I think this is going to be a great story,
if all your poem summed up in one.
Ill be checking this page,
every now and then.
;)

When i read "The Sly Spy(He's back alive?!)" (part 1 and 2) i didn't realize that there was more to the story. but i went through and read the others and i like them. i like the story. you did a great job!
crystal