Comments : Angels Apart

  • 15 years ago

    by Randy Lee

    It is such a pleasure to read your work. Keep em comin.

  • 15 years ago

    by Lucy

    Her wings were frayed and her soul weak,
    Lost in darkness, whispers speak.
    I close my eyes, you touch my skin,
    Alone, I start to think again.
    Fluttered open, darkness stays...
    Decisions made, we went our ways.

    my favorite stanza...a blessed writer...i was just reading to return the favor, but i enjoyed this surreal and write beautifully...
    lee nicole*
    i know my spelling sucks, sorry

  • 13 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Great work!!...Beautifully penned!!..loved this 1!!a 5/5!

  • 13 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    I loved the meaning of this poem. The rhymes and flow was well done. The structure was good as well. Wonderful write, keep it up.

    Peace, Joe

  • 6 years ago

    by Midnight Sky

    I saw this title and just had to read it beautiful job 5\5 here