~ excellent poem
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

I'm glad your back! I've been wondering where you went! I really liked the honesty you convey in this piece! Very emotional! I look forward to reading more~Holly

I was really impressed by this, you don't see this style often any more and I absolutely love your poem it's simple lovely. I give you a 5/5

thanks everyone... and im glade u liekd this style... i decided i would try something different...

that was awsome, i loved it aye, you really good
5 out of 5
xo bam

That is heart clenching. I loved it though! Great poem. I love the reptition of it and the flow.. just everything about this poem I love. Great job.
Take Care ad God Bless,
Sarah-Joy

And yet another amazing poem. Never give up on love because with out it, there is nothing worth living for. Keep writing.

<3 bella

You are truely amazing, every thing you write is truely felt and makes you want to read more. Keep up the good writing

Wow you must really care for this girl
i love it when a guy is not afraid to write : ) very very good technique here i loved the structure of it and the rhyming helped muy mucho ! 5/5