Comments : The Final Day

  • 19 years ago

    by ***LiiL MiZz DiiVA***

    HEY IT'S ME AGAIN . THAT ONE WAS GOOD TO. WOW IT REALLY MAKES ME THINK.WHAT YOU RIGHT ABOUT IS LIKE WHAT HAPPENDED TO ALOT OF MY FRIEDS. THEY TRY TO COMMIT SUICIDE. BUT I KNOW THAT IT ISN'T WORTH IT AS I SAID LIFES A BI*** RIGHT NOW BUT BELIVE ME IT WILL GET BETTER. I HOPE YOU FIND YOURSELF A GOOD DUDE. THAT WILL BRING YOUR SELF ESTTEM UP MORE. WELL GOOD GOOD LUCK YOU ARE SO GOOD

  • 19 years ago

    by Amba

    hey this one is really good to,
    i hope u dont hurt your self over a guy, i did it, and trust me it aint worth it in the long run! well keep it this gud shit!! ur reali good,
    xoxobambam

  • 19 years ago

    by XxXangeltearsXxX

    Thanks for your encouragement guys!!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Lithium

    fantasic poem u have great ryhming skills keep it up gurl xox

  • 18 years ago

    by LAST RONIN

    very good, great writing..

  • 18 years ago

    by XxXangeltearsXxX

    thank you so much!!! everyone this means so much thank you!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Katrina Boblina

    i love how you can rhyme like its so easy, amazing!

  • 18 years ago

    by Summer

    wow..you are such a good writer..idk what to say..

  • 18 years ago

    by Alyssa

    Great poem i could really feel it while i was reading it 5/5