wow its good i totaly got it and understood it. My friend last year took her life a week after her boyfriend died in a car accident and she was driving the car. So i guess now i have a fresher and better understanding of what she might of been going through.
Awesome poem thank you

YOU AREN'T GOOD MY ASS.YOU TAKE OUT YOUR ANGER WHEN YOU WRITE AND THAT IS AWSOME i TRY TO DO THAT AS WELL. MOST OF MY POEMS ARE ABOUT DEATH AND LOVE. BUT DON'T SAY THAT YOU WANT TO DIE. YOU REALLY DON'T I HAVE ALMOST. AND IT IS NOT A GOOD FEELING OKAY. KEEP IT UP AND KEEP UR HEAD UP HIGH
DON'T GET INTO ANY DRUGS OR ANY OF THAT SHIT WHEN YOU ARE DEPRESSED OKAY. JUST DO ME THAT FAVOR. YOU ARE SPECIAL AND BELIVE ME YOU DON'T WANT TO DIE AT SUCH YOUNG AGE. CUS DEATH SUX. LIVE ON AND YOU WILL DISCOVER THAT IT ISN'T A BI*** LIKE MOST OF US THINK.
I USED TO ALWAYS BE DEPRESSED. BUT NOW I WRITE POEMS AND I FEEL SO MUCH BETTER. YOU SHOULD CHECK THEM OUT AND TELL ME HOW YOU FEEL. K K K K K K K K K K K K K K

better not go back on ur word, cuz i need the feedback as welll...lol
ne way,i actually kinda liked it. don't feel bad, i ain't all that good neither.ne way, good job!!!

you dont know what your talkign about...not very good yeah right! you have an amazing talent, don't let it go...ever.

thank you everyone! i really appreciate this!

you have awesome poetry dont ever doubt yourself you are alot better than you think keep writing and maybe if yaz write enough you could write a book that would be cool! lol love your poetry keep writing

Love it...