no it don't suck at all! i bet it's brilliant with the tune and melody and things. you shouldn't bring yourself down like this and say your work is rubbish and it sucks. because really it doesn't, if i was you i would let everyone know my talent! keep it uo it's fantastic! it has a lot of meaning to it. luv ya, lucy x

thanks.. that means alot to me

not really your best one but i still like it