wow that was really awsum, i reali liked that aye, ur a reali talanted writer, keep it up xoxo bambam

{plz chek out sum o mine} i gave u
5/5

"I knew then, that what was done was done
I ran the race, but somebody else had won
I'd never say it was me who took my life
It wasn't, my killer was a knife"
Amazing lines right there, great poem once again theres nothing else to say expect brovo!lol

wow..interesting poem. i really liked the ending

I liked it. it was suspenceful 'till the end. Very imagenative and strong. It had substance in it. It realy made me think about what you were trying to conveyand and then...;)