Well I really enjoyed reading this poem; it was well written and really kept me interested. If you need any help with your friends like you said on your comment, then email me and I’ll see what I can do for them

It's good you put the explanation at the bottom, it helped me understand how you were writing this poem. My favorite part was "all doors that were open suddenly slammed shut." That was great. Keep writing,
Satuxxa

great poem..loved it..great job...5/5...and thanx for commenting on my poem it meant a lot to me

Michelle

that was a really good poem
5-5

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Wow...great job
keep writing =)
5/5