Beautiful poem - really intense and full of emotion - I loved reading this piece thank you for sharing :O)
One piece of advice however is this is probably better suited to love poems besides that well done and keep up the great work :o)

Trevor, I thought this was absolutely a well written and special poem. Great job, my friend, hugs, love *Ann*

Your style is amazing. Everything you write is so deep. So many people write with words, but you write with your heart and mind...awesome.

Cool. It was written from the heart which seems to be the hardest to do yet you pulled it off. It was well done.
~Faith of the Fallen