this is a really good poem... i enjoyed reading it.... have you been bullied?.. cuz i know that it hurts... it's hard to get through but keep your head up.. good times will come.... you really did a good job on this.. you should try writing more, you've got talent, keep it up... and thanks for commenting on all of my poems... it really does mean alot to me!!! again great job!! luv ya... DeAnna

Hey Lucy! I know exactly how you feel about getting bullied and i know how much it hurts i have been bullied since i was in 4th grade and i am now in 10th and it hasnt stopped yet so i know how much it hurts...but youve got amazing talent you need to get more poems on here so i can read them! cant wait to read more!
Kacie

hey veryone! thank you all for your comments they mean a lot. i am writing another poem that i will put on here soon. it's ok i guess! thanks kacie, i'm so glad you understand how it feels. i hope things work out for you. i will email you again soon! i haven't been on the comp 4 a while! thanks again everyone! luv ya..lucy x

Hi my name is jo and i am on my daughters account. I am a youth and community worker and i am doing a project on bullying and would wish to use ur poem to read to other young people i hope u don't mind. Thanks for a lovely poem x

Hey Jo! Sorry i haven't wrote a comment back to you! Wow really? I'm so glad you liked it! Of corse i don't mind! Let me know how it went won't you? Thanks x