Your poem is great...u express ur feelings very well. I'm sorry u lost someone so special. I know what ur going through. Thanks for commenting on my poem.

Caitlin
email if u want Crazy_ditz14@hotmail.com

Your poem is great...u express ur feelings very well. I'm sorry u lost someone so special. I know what ur going through. Thanks for commenting on my poem.

Caitlin
email if u want Crazy_ditz14@hotmail.com

I like it, though you still need ot work on beter word choices