perfectly put, flawless. what else can i say??? keep it up, your writing brilliant. and thank you for your comments again, means such a lot :) take care always, lu -x-x-x-

Fantastic, you are a talent, i love the expression in your work
Doreen

I really like this poem, you wrote it very well. It's nice to read some creative poems every once in a while, and I thought that this was definitely creative and unique. So true too. Nice work! and thx for the comments on mine.:)

Wow that was an exellent poem unique and very well written. Check out some of mine if u would Thanx and Take Care!

Excellent...reminded me of something. I'm gonna write a poem about my poetry.

awww thank you all for your comments and suggestions! ive taken them all into consideration! thanks again!
xxxLoUxxx

WOW YOU ARE A GREAT POET... 5/5

MUCH LOVE
~*~HEATHER~*~

Lil-Miss-Luce!!! Very impressive. Really drew my down to the next line.
Love on your bio..... here is the door to my soul.
I highly rate your comments because of this one poem. Thank you.

I like this one =) deserve a 5/5!
very good.. hugs

yet another great readf...u have alot of talent and can really convey ur thoughts and emotions through you poetry...its really amazing.

keep it up!

another awesome poem ..keep on writting..
much love
shannon

Very beautifully written, I love this poem. This is quite possibly the greates poem I have read on this site......