Beautiful flow to the poem...rhyming was good...you write well...take care and keep smiling...FIVE>>>

thanks very much! really i meann that.

Good Poem
*5/5*

I liked your rhyme scheme... (aaba) I'll have to try that sometime. Read some of my stuff if you ever get the chance.

i will and thanks alot every one!

well thanks and i really appreciate the comment!

I love this poem! Its great.

I can really relate to it!

Just keep on writing!!!

i will and thanks alot!