Very well written, I like the last two parts the most, keep it up xxx

omg..woww...that was just perfection <333 im sorry this happened :( so sad...i love you hun...this was awesome <333 lovely babe..xxxx

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

i hope all is well xxx

Excellent poem, very well written. 5/5.
Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

Amazing poem! i really enjoyed reading it! i feel the same way sometimes.... check out my poems n comment if u have the chance! xxx
-Erika-