hey! it doesnt suck you can really feel the emotion involved! keep trying and you will succeed! dont pull yourslef down girl! id appreciate your comments on some of my work if you have the time. keep it luv!
xxxLoUxxx

hey! it doesnt suck you can really feel the emotion involved! keep trying and you will succeed! dont pull yourslef down girl! id appreciate your comments on some of my work if you have the time. keep it luv!
xxxLoUxxx

it doesnt suck! altho i think the punctuation could do with a slight alterationa nd perhaps make it all ryhme or not rhyme at all rather than little bitds! good for a first submit! take care and thanks for ur comment
xxxLoUxxx

It was good but it colud of been better with some changes
; keep writing never stop
~HazE