Comments : Not Nice To Tease

  • 19 years ago

    by Princess09

    this one is special so i hope u got it and liked it!!! its about a guy acting like he liked me and doing "things" with me then backing away like he didn't or was scared!!!!!! tell me what u think

  • 19 years ago

    by Marjan

    oh, its rhyme is sooooooo brilliant.
    you're really talented.
    Marjan

  • 19 years ago

    by Lonely Heart .ღ.

    nice one, and thank you for commenting <3

  • 19 years ago

    by nikj

    one question Do you use a rhyme dictionary or is this true talent?
    If so I think you should think about writing hard core someday and presenting to a publisher they like young blood like you.