amazing work as always, seriously, never stop writing, this stuff just rocks.

emma x

Oooo...I love it!! Its really good hun. I didn't find it too confusing. Through the whole thing I felt I could relate to it!! Keep it up babe...you're one of a kind!! :)
Love you
Sammy

Astonishing. Keep writing.

I liked how you jumbled the piece into this clash of words that symbolised the state of mind and pain.
I loved these lines,
"And misguided trust
With blood of softened stone"
And I think the last line was ironic and beautifully concluded the piece.

Well done