PLEASE COMMENT! C'MON, C'MON!!!!

Powerful and I find not so typical in nature considering how prevalent the subject matter is on P&Q. Though due to how it began, I actually wondered at first if you were discussing another issue than suicide. The last line almost mars the nuance of symbolism for the reader, but I'm not sure that making the end more vague would serve the purpose. Regardless, I enjoyed the poem.