Wow, wow, wow, this was a really good poem, well structured and interesting to read, very good :O I cant believe you only just started putting poetry on this site

x) oh cool, very interesting. It was definitly original and also i liked the structure of it too! It was different. Wow, keep on writing.
SatuzKa

i lyke ur style kaufy ...lyke the flow of the poem...nice 1 ...keep writing !

take care

wow good powm again! lol i like how it flows and ends ...love the line...loitering towards the light... sheer brilliance! keep it up n thanks again!
xxxLoUxxx

Thanks again. I wrote this poem about 4 years ago, and now I have an excuse to share it with everyone. This site has really brought something out of me and made me feel a little bit happier.