excellent poem, very good in rhyme.

5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love.

Love, Amit ~

good poem

well. we all want to die but there is something that is our torinquent our something that chains us to this earth to keep us from leaving cuz we love those things so much. im happy im one of those things for you. same here, :) don't worry i won't go just yet. lets just wait till we're good and old and sitting next to each other in an old ppl's home on a horrible floral print couch. then we can talk about our grand children and thier problems. kk? sounds like a good plan to me.
oo yeah this is a good poem *5*
spiffy tiffy luvs ya

hey spiff can it be in europe? ya know european guys r suposed to be hott!
lol

WOW! Great poem! You are a really good writer. Keep up the good work!
Love ya alwayz....
Haily
XOXOXOXO