love it, of course i love almost all poetry keep up the words

Well done girl

5.0 excellent! xox

hmmmm im not sure i liked this one if im honest....think it really struggles to flow (sorry to say so) but it does portray a good message.
xxxLoUxxx

Loved the metaphors in this poem, it was a good one.

it was good in the whole underlying point but it was a little hard to follow. it was still good
trevor--

Thank you for all the comenting people.appreciate every comment.It might be hard to follow, but as in all the poems...just expressing my feelings.Cheers~

loved it-loved it- loved it- I get the feeling life was changing for this soul, and they were a little anxious about that........I really liked it, it had a sadness that captured me, and held me until I read it all....please comment on mine, if you have time....thanks love ya becky

what made u so inspired to right this????

what made u so inspired to write this "Story"???

Belle Sweets I can't write a comment on your quotes i can only vote ( which I did).As for the poem I had some truobles and I thought I might loose the right to be in this place everymorning ans see what I saw which made me evaluate what I really enjoy about it and what really matters.

How do enter a contest please tell me

never mind