Comments : Broken Smile

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    That was an excellent poem..really awesome. It's so true and im sure so many could realte, as i do.
    Great work hun and take care xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Danai

    OMG, this poem is wonderful!!! u really do know how to write! the words and the feelings they express are really powerful... what else can I say? u're great! keep up the good work! needless 2 say, 5/5! xxoxoxx

  • 17 years ago

    by xxEvilAngelxx

    *Tear*

    Perfectly written... amazing

  • 17 years ago

    by Gabrielle

    OMG!! That poem was sooo emotional i loved it. It flowed so easily and it was beautiful. I love reading your poems.

  • BeauTiFuLLy wRiTTeN..
    sHoRt bUt PeNetRaTiNg WoRdS..
    GooD JoB!!.. ^^,

  • 17 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    5/5. Wow..

  • 11 years ago

    by WintersAngel

    I love the flow. Great poem.