WOW! Brilliant! Very historical yet still fantasyish. I loved it. Your wording was flawless; very powerful. I loved your description, and the mention of the "ice age" brilliantly done and finished so neatly.
5/5 definetely! :-)

hee you're my hero ^_^

Great, great, great, great!

almost a mystical touch to it.....very deep and thought provoking, it flowed really well i like it alot.

take care

thank you kindly ^_^

actually though I'm not really sure what I beleive in, I just research different religions and whatnot out of curiousity.