another great poem. i really like your work!
-K

Thats a beautiful poem it has texture and great flow. I loved it.

Absolutely astonishing, the vividness, the lyrical linguistics are unparalelled by all, you really have a gift for descriptive verses, and my mind was rocked by this ones' deepest theme of heartache. I've never viewed any work quite like this, and I can honestly say it is above and beyond what I'm accustomed to having the pleasure of reading. I was truly honored to recieve your comment and given the opportunity to read your poems has shown me there are individuals in society who have a deeper sense of understanding than I ever imagined. If i had to descibe my opinion of you through the works I've read so far, I'd choose "intellectually advanced" and I mean that with honest sincerity. This poem is universal in its ability to appeal to almost if not all people who hve ever loved and lost, of which experience I am fully familiar with. Congratulations on this one, you should be immensely proud of its' precise complexion, the overall feel and raw emotion that gathers while each line fulfills its' course, delivering a portrait to the reader impossible to explain with as limited language as the english language. Honestly, incredible job and keep up the posts and comments, I'm looking forward to both. in laymens terms, this thing was friggin awesome, no critique possible.