wow, i loved that!! great job!!
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on my poem- its bout, its sad love..

keep up the great work!!!!
xoxo
Aubs

i think it was pretty good, but you should make it rhyme better. i got this poem and i liked it a lot. 4/5
p.s- please rate mine

dont live your life in regret. it will tear you apart. chek out some of my poems