Give me some time, get to know the real me. And don't think for one second I wasn't happy with you, I just couldn't enjoy it. Please, just hold on a little longer, this is tough for me too.

good work. you and a/j were cute. hope you two will fix things up soon. this is pretty tough to watch. ttyl! nancy

Is this even a poem? I couldn't really tell. It sounds like a diary entree. Your attempts at rhyming were pathetic, and even if you felt the need to rhyme your journal, why did it suddenly go away?

Tip for you:
1) Buy a thesaurus (no, it's not a dinosaur).
2) Get word perfect (you could use some grammar work)

dang....thats crzy

true though. sorry ash. it wasnt really all that good. maybe this one wasnt good, but i did like your latest one. it was ok too. sry. dont take it personal. sorry.