Comments : TURN OF FATE!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Full of happiness! You expressed your emotions very well! Take Care! Brooke~

  • 18 years ago

    by Courtney Lynn

    another really good... No AWSOME poem!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Courtney Lynn

    another really good... No AWSOME poem!!

  • 18 years ago

    by EoB

    This is a good poem, yet it lacks that special something...It is quite a clichè, but still well written...

    some of the rhymes seems quite forced, which brings it down, and it doesn't have a natural flow...

    keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Poetic Tragedy08

    Wow, you certainly know how to write! keep up the awesome job! this one was very good and very interesing!! 5/5!