wow, that was truly amazing! It brought tears to my eyes! keep up the amazing work! check out some of my poems when you get the chance,
lia jnell

Aw....That was so sweet but a bit sad! Very nice write!!! 5/5

I know how this feels! And you capture it so deeply! Perfectly almost! keep writing

its one of the best iv read so far wish i could write like that but i'll just keep on trying well done

bex

that was every sweet i wish my gurl throught like that

wow...i feel the same way about this guy ben i havent seen him for like a year but we where so tight and i mean we wanted to go out but he had to move.

THANX HEAPS. APPRECIATE IT!

This is a great poem!i loved it!youre a very talented writer!this poem describes exactly how i feel right now.Keep up the good work!x0x0
<3Chelsea

CHeLsErBeAnZ. cheers

Excellent poem !

This is really good ! keep it up!