This is an amazing poem! You wrote it with such honesty, just full of emotions! Well done~Holly

Very nice Amy, once again a 5/5

I like this poem, and in a way i can relate to i. That feeling of calling out for help, wanting people to notice you , but no one really does! I like the way you repeated the "As i lay hear dying"keep writing xx

Good Poem sweetheart. as alllllllways.

Wow this poem was deep... i really liked it. Ur an amazin writer... Peace and love Mia Xxx