giiiiirrl. I know the feeling..5/5..keep writing..ur good.

>.< thanks

wow you must hate lols take kare nice poem 5/5
-Lady Jaz

U showed true feeling I liked that! Good job I can relate to this poem felt like that myself more than once! Take Care! Brooke

very good.. I like this one a lot =) I voted a 5! keep it up...!!! please check out some of my poems.. thanks a lot, hugs

thanks for ur comments u guys! i'll get to urs as soon as i'm done checkin the rest of mine!
xoxo
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Okay job, I thought the rhyme was good, but there wasn't really any imagery or anything that really made it stick out to me. The topic was also a bit cliche. I think that this poem shows that you have a lot of promise in poetry writing, just work on possibly using more imagery and metaphor in your writing.

thanks..! i'll try to see how i can fit that into my next peom!

I know how this feels and it's not that great. Good Job. Keep it up!
5/5