Great poem! Im suprised it hasnt got more votes actually cause its totally awesome.....NO I MUST NOT SAY THAT! I SOUND TOO MUCH LIKE BARBIE! Lol yeah I give you a five.

Take care,
Rachelxx

you're such a great poet, i love this poem!! yet again 5/5!

~lil slam~ PLP

wow.. thats a really really good poem!! your like such a good poem maker person!.. good job!