David you know as well as I do that i feel the same way.You've had a girlfriend and I havent so for that I hate you.

You've had your chances but you just never took them. Thats your own fault. And don't talk to your father that way.

David I have never had that chance.I'm trying right now with Brittany but I don't think thats going to work.

Don't give up hope my son. Everyone has had at least one chance. The person you want isn't always the person you need.

omgsh! i loved it..very sad you have a talent.. 5/5..keep on writting hun!
much love
shannon

anther good poem altho there are afew spellin mistakes in this one..by this i think u have written a similar word to the one that u meant to e.g.
Is move ...instead of is more?
take care
xxxLoUxxx

aww thats teary eyeing me lol
5/5

dont give up babe itll happen soon im sure! dont give in to the peer pressure dat says uve gt 2 av dun certain fings by a certain time its a load of bulls**t! xxxx

Very good, great rhyme scheme and nice wording. 5/5.

Very good poem. I've felt that way too because i've never been kissed, hehe. I liked the flow of the poem too. Keep writing, take care.
Satuxxa

i havent ever been kissed and i'm fourteen i can so relate to your poem it is so great that i couldnt take my eyes away

Wow, this poem is really emotional..I love it. Great job. >3jess