Hey this is great...and itz true...which sux...but meh..itz all good...hope ur doin good...keep it up..xoxo
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

wow powerful xxxxxx

Hmmm very open to interpretation, lack of imagery and emphasis used to make use of the points your trying to state. Perhaps better choice of words, I dunno its just not doing it for me personally. The message though Mandy has such truth and realism to it and you did a great job putting it together regardless that its not my personal cup of tea...

You captured excalty how i feel. lol. well done again. You seem to like writing about how you feel. then again most people do. well done. 5/5
~@L€X~

hey well done its a really nice poem. i go thru similar things to that too... read "Some More Disrespect" by me it has a similar theme too... tc well done x

very true n emaningful 5/5

i think this is a very good topic that many people can relate to. nice work.
~Freak~

Not bad, but kinda of flowed weird, too much "know" lol.