Awe-inspiring sense of surrealist and unconformed rhyme skill. Un matched by any, comparable to few, this is actually a deeply disturbing vision of a hurt and lonely person. I hope you can produce work similar to this, only not in the dark sense of suicidal tendencies. Completely overwhelming to read when in a mood of depression and lowliness. Fcukin-A on this one babe, commendable and descriptive of an inner insatiable desire not many people can cope with to your level of understanding; the words strike me as uneasy and disheartened. Please make this less of a attern in relation to content, not quality. the quality is amazing.

thanks for ur comment, really kind of u! :)
i loveeeeee this poem, its got so many layers to it! well done hunni!

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wow that was a very great, unique poem. I loved it keep writing take care