nice poem, thanks for commenting on mine. really made my day. a/s/l. just wondering, you can go ahead and e-mail me at brokennside83@yahoo.com or at why83km@msn.com anyway, keep up the good work!
Kasie

aww wow...that's so amazing! your first post and you've already got so many comments and votes! congrats :) I can see why too though, you're an amazing writer! <3 I hope you continue to post on this site =)

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

definitive taste of prose shown here. imagery is unparalled by anything I've yet to see on this site, although I am new. I respect this poem for its brutal and raw energy, emitted through each and every word. outwardly significant in its' ability to portray exactly how and what you felt at the time. whether or not the feeling continues to exist, none of my business, however, you have a talent and knack for describing how you feel without being wordy and writing an explanation, but rather an artistic perspective not yet perceived. commendable job and excellent work.

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it pritty good so im puttin a 5 there so ya bye byes

that's amazing. thanks for the comment. keep up the amazing work.

x3 x3 Katie

very nice, thanx for commenting on my poem, it mean a lot....5/5. Keep it up!

I honestly think you're amazing. I know you don't know me but I was wondering if you or Jessica could give me advice about my guy. Unlike you he's different. Like you he chased and in the beginning would do anything for me... I fell for him deep... and it seems like afte the first few months he got tired of putting in effort and gradually went down to no effort really. He never phones, barely texts, doesn't go online, and at school he use to see me at lunch and break then only at lunch then only at break then never cept across the room in lessons. Now we its summer holidays and he see's me like once a week and doesn't contact me between unless I text him to ask him round. He's going to a diff school next term and I'm so scared. I just don't know why he chased me so much in the start and was like you in the start then suddenly puts no effort in. He says he's still in love with me and I've said to him if he wants out then to tell me now and save me from this hurt... and he says he's seriously still in love with me and always will be but it doesn't feel like it anymore. I don't know what to do. Please help me if you can. love always xxx

wow! that was a widked peom i loved it i envy how u wright....