Huny this poem is just as good as anyone else's! Dont underestimate urself ok. This poem has so much depth to it, and it really does show life as people dont like to see it...the TRUTH. Please keep writing and expressing yourself. Take care

xX MAZ XX

It was good, the rhymes were good, but it didn't flow that well... good job overall.
Keep it up*hugs*

~*~~**m.c.flem**~~*~

Wow. that actually left a lump in my throat...that is so true tho.good job.

OMG! I love this poem...it is short but it gets the point across! 5/5 LOVE IT!