that was very deep and showed how your really feeling....just try to hang on....even when you think that you cant go on, just think of the good things in life....the things that make you keep going....and dont let go.

MAYBE I CAN DIE A BIT TONIGHT !!!!
WOW, GAVE ME GOOSE BUMPS . 5/5

IT WOULD MAKE A GRRREAAT SONG

wow... i really loved this poem... excellently worded and good in depth... you could make this into a song... i know how you feel.... keep up the excellent writting...
-sk8er101-

Again, awesome. That is kind of like one of my poems titled "Sick Lullaby". 5.0.

You can make a song into that.