Comments : Helpless

  • 19 years ago

    by David

    I understand what your going through im going through the same thing and i know that sounds weird since im a guy but my i have a gf and well she acts that way. well 5/5 very nice poem. check mine out sometime.

    ~David~

  • 19 years ago

    by Abbie

    I like the way this poem has been written, i don't think i've come across this structure before! The emotions come through the words well, hope things get better xx

  • 19 years ago

    by Maz

    Huny this is a fantastic poem, I really like the style! I hope your ok

    xX MAZ Xx

  • 19 years ago

    by Scaleeski

    WHY SO SAD! Haha..(And you asrea a better writer haha) Anyway! It's a good one I like it alot

    Chris

  • 19 years ago

    by Scaleeski

    I meant to say You are a better writer..'cpet I suck a typing