i cnt describe it, it woz so brilliant, i loved it, n i hope u dnt feel like tht ur seem like a really nice person. loved the rhym and the rythm . :)

One great poem with such a strong memories..you will be remembered for sure.Thanks on your comments on mine.Jeff

Ohh,that was too sad ! : (

your Poem affected ! coz of that,i believe its Excellent Job ! its the type that i like, i love reading sad stuff !

soo, really Excelent and Keep on it !

: )

Peace
Rua Francis.

i loved it to keep writing

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