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*calms down*

oh my god. I love this :) you're sososososososososososo amazing!!!!! omg, like totally amazing...this is my new favvorrittteee...so perfect and beautiful and deep and meaningful and just
SO WOW! <3 i love you so much angel...and I will forever and ever and ever...this was perfect...just so dam amazing xxxx i love you <33

-Mortalidaga
xxxTakeCarexxx

WOW! amazing i loooooovved it, it flowed nicely with lots of emotion and stuff in it........... nice work hope to tlk to u later cyah
*-*Kat*-*

WOW! AMAZING!!! omg, you are so talented, I loved it, take care and keep writing...
Alwayz, Danielle

Damn, I'm out of nice words. I've used them all, and reused them, and reused them, and reused them. I guess I'll just have to use them over again. So, this one is absolutaly wonderfull!

Wicked. This was extremely cool and one of your best.

i really like this poem....it portrays defense mechanisms and the nature of people's tendencies perfectly....job well done.

Good poem! At the beginning though it flowed a certain rhyme pattern and then near the middle it changed again which really messed up the flow.... I think you could maybe work on that and then for this verse i have a suggestion
*But what happens now
When the cracks begin
What do I do about it
When I don’t know how*
I think you can maybe say

But what happens now,
When the cracks begin to show
What do i do about it
How can i fix what i don't know?*

Well it's just a thought:)
Anyways great poem.

wow logan that was so brilliant, keep it up

wow, i loved this poem so much! and i feel like thats all my comments to people on here ever say, but its so true, i really really loved this. it was beautiful and just, wow. <3
xx nikki