Awww Toni the imagery is flawless. I'm in total awe. You have such a talent for manipulating words.

I hope everything's okay though, It's quite a worrying poem. I'm sorry for earlier and not really speaking properly.

Take good care of yourself munchkin.
All my love,
Laura.

This is so amazing! You're a great poet. definately 5/5.
Take Care
Always, Danielle

that is bloody amazing. wow. the words at the end are so visual sort of thing its just amazing, i loved it completely im such a huge fan i meen i luv ur stuff and this was just so gd, hun im still here if u need to chat about netin okay? i hope youre doing alrite, if im not online and u need to chat just email me hun, im worried bout u,
lots o luv,
ellie
xoxox

excellently put, outstanding again, what more can i say??
keep your head up hun :)

lu -x-x-x-

Thankyou all xxx