fantastic
and
well-written

That was a good poem. I liked the ending. Thanks for commenting on my poem, a suicide for my family. It means alot to me.
Much love,
Jordan-Paige

great poem keep it up!

it was a great poem and well you never no what is goin to happen in the future and well since you couldn't laugh then youstill can laugh now and well who ever he was i hope he goes to hell and hope he doesnt do it to other s i love your poems

Kimeko, I words hit me like bricks. your poem has every emotion and everything I feel... Nicola told me something and i feel its true.. she said" they'll be the ones that end up lying in bed alone" So you your not alone, and if you need some one to talk to I here. Stay strong.. hes not worth it...none of them will ever be

Love
Jenn