i think its a cute poem and i give it a 5!...hes a good writer...tell him to keep up the good work...check out poems...bye!

Lots of love..
NiCoLe

hey that was str8 from the heart love ur style.

You can really step into his shoes and feel what he does. Short and sweet but straight to the point. Very nice. Good luck to you, your mom, and especially your dad.

Check my poems out.

aww very touching. Tell your dad I hope he can be with your mom again soon. and that he's a great writer! -5
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