5/5!!!

AWESOME

LUV,
Noziyna

Hey
This is a great poem. If I can.. may I add you to my favorites? Please?! 5/5! Keep up the good work ok!?

Love Always
Mya

Very deep poem. Never read anything like this before. Don't like the way it changed style at the end, but I like the stanzas seperately. Well done.

Take care of yourself.
All my love,
Laura.

All i can say is wow. that was excellent

Amazing :D

It is very clear to me that you have a very inciteful mind. Your intelligence is above average and it probably leaves you terribly restless at times. Your poetry is developing very well. Your word usage is very familiar to me. Your style of writing has an energy that draws the reader in. Use this to your advantage and don't be afraid to pick your ryme styles and sequences. You have a nice future in writing, I do hope you stay with it and improve on your talents.

Luvd itt .. <3

That was sad and so beautiful. 5