This is written well... your a very talented writer. I know how you feel... but just remember your not a failure. Stay strong. Love always - Elissa

Wow, that was really sad. You're not a failure, actually, I have a feeling that you are going to turn out to be a very talented person. I know how you feel... no one sees how you feel inside except for you. Hang in there, great work...
Car

awwwwwwwwww that was sad~!!!!~ i feel that way some times. but then i remember all the happy times i share with my friends and i feel better. so hang on if u really feel that way~!!!~
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awww...that was so sad yet very well written. You are not a failure if that is who you were writing about. keep writing take care

Hey Krystin! That was a good poem!!! I liked the part that said"she wakes up each morning
only to go to sleep at night
she stands up to fall down
she cant do anything right
she is a failure and she knows it." These days the only thing I look forward to when I wake up in the mornings is to go to sleep again that night. So this poem was definitely one I could relate to. Please read some of my poems and comment!!

thats deep...i loved it!