Well David you've done it again.It was good.It made me cry all morning.

AMAZING!!!!! im really sorry that this happened to you, if it did. im really happy that youR'e still here. amazingly written, as always. can't wait to read more.
-xXx-

aww another really sad heartfelt poem, u write with such emotion its brilliant!
take care
xxxLoUxxx

this was a good poem...some lines were too long for others, but it was very expressive and got the point across. job well done.

Wow, David, that's a really emotional and well written poem. If this comes from personal experience, then I think it was such a brave step to get your feelings out in a poem, and so beautifully too. The only suggestion I thought of is that the first 2 lines of the last stanza don't flow very well together. I usually find that when people just write *kill myself*, it doesn't sound so poetic anymore (even though yours still did, lol). So maybe u could think of another way of saying it, but I really like it just the way it is, so you can just ignore what I said. lol. Nice work.

really good poem i really like it .. well written ur a good writer!

I liked this poem...though some of the wording was somewhat confusing. Other than than, wonderfully written.

thats really really sad. I like them all so far very talented!!!!
5outof5

hey....very sad poem,but I like it....keep on...

That's it, you're going on my favorites, excellent poem once again.

very good poem!!!! 5/5! well done =) please check out my poem "without wings" it would mean a lot.. thanks and hugs from me!!

Over all I thought that was a good poem, and it's good you didn't make it any longer because that would have made the flow bad. I liked it. My favorite part is the this:

I found your body outside of your door,
Your story was told by the blood on the floor

That part was great. I don't have any suggestions on how to make it better, I really like it the way it is. Keep writing,
Satuxxa

Great way to let out feelings. Very well written another great poem David! Take Care! Brooke

I posted a new one today about my childhood would love ur advice! Thanx!

very emotional and very poweful. The flow was really good and so was the rhyming.enjoyed reading this one. Truly sad but a great write. Keep at it.

very good David!! keep it up.. I voted a 5! GREAT! please check out my poem "eternal sunshine of the spotless mind" please comment/vote.. thanks

Nicely done, a few very minor flow issues, but nothing big. I liked the subdued emotion that came across, it seemed like you were too sad to cry, if that mad any sense. Again, well done.

WOW!!! if your other poems are as good as this one... You have real TALENT!!!

amazing... I love this one.. take care and good luck

perfect poem love is so strong

I like this one, it's amazing how you feel after reading it. It's kind of a numbness... to sad to cry, to big to hide.
anyways, well done ;)