very good and so true keep up the good work

This poem is awesome! I love it....Keep writing k mwah xoxo

I absolutely LOVE the last cuplet of this poem.

The whole thing is good, originally put forth and well thought out, but the end is really where it ties together, which is a great thing, because the end alone can make or break a poem.

Beautiful, Jesse. Take care.

Love, K.

aww i like this poem it's cute...good job!!5/5

wow this is good...
well written
NaNa

That poem is really good!Ihave read most of your other ones and they are verey good keep writeing them!!

G2G
Brittany