Comments : Dont derseve you...

  • 18 years ago

    by PonderBoy

    Why dont you diserve those things?
    I think everyone does!

    Nice poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Aimee

    Nice poem got me thinking. keep itup sweetz
    take care
    love aimee

  • 18 years ago

    by husbandlover

    This is so awesome! it's very expressful.im sure ur guy deserves you.5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Liquid Dreams

    I liked this poem; it was good! until the marriage part, i was thinking that it was a lot like how friendships should work too...lol. good work!
    thanks for r/r/c me!
    ~rhi