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  • 19 years ago

    by Oliver Stevenson

    you don;t have to drop hun :) cos i will catch you :) cool poem :) xxxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Ironic Allure

    Hmmm very different style to what you usually do. With a smidgin of Dark in there too. Very unique, but I'm not sure how to interepret(Sp?) the last line.

    I can’t fall anymore…

    It's either sayin you're at rock bottom, which gets me very worried.

    or

    It's saying that you're fighting, which is so very uplifting to hear :)

    I'm going to assume It's the latter, given the line before, but still know that I'm here for you, just incase I'm wrong :)

    Take good care of yourself.
    All my love,
    Laura.

  • 19 years ago

    by deadnalone

    thats really diff toni, good to see you trying out new styles and i think this poem seemed very dark, sort of like one of those dreams where u cant wake up or you can't scream in it, if u no wat i mean, im still really worried about you hun, are you okay?
    luv,
    ellie
    xoxoxox

  • 19 years ago

    by confusion

    really different to your usual stuf, and still excellent, very deep. hope you are ok, take care always, lu -x-x-x-