Comments : My Dream

  • 19 years ago

    by Oliver Stevenson

    u know what hun... this dream will come true :) because it will all bve alright, and i will be there to heolp it be :) xxxx i love you!!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Ironic Allure

    So picturesque. So prettiful, so perfect.
    First verse blew me away. Was amayonaising.

    The last stanza was so cleverly written, but it's worrying again. Things WILL be alright munchkin, I promise. I'm here for you, still trudgin along *Waves* :)

    Take good care of yourself.
    All my love,
    Laura.

  • 19 years ago

    by deadnalone

    wow thats such a gd poem hun, loved it. the last stanza really finishes it off well and it flowed so beautifully. its sounds like an amazing dream and its gonna cum true for you hun, i no it will, because ur strong and ur gonna make it,
    much loves,
    ellie xx

  • 19 years ago

    by deadnalone

    wow thats such a gd poem hun, loved it. the last stanza really finishes it off well and it flowed so beautifully. its sounds like an amazing dream and its gonna cum true for you hun, i no it will, because ur strong and ur gonna make it,
    much loves,
    ellie xx

  • 19 years ago

    by confusion

    this is a dream you are well worthy of, another excellent poem, your talent seems to be flawless. keep it up, and always here if ever needed hun :)

    take care, luv lu -x-x-x-

  • 19 years ago

    by Toni

    xxx thanku